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第一篇:《(免费)英语短文改错》

高考英语短文改错课堂练1

文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。

No. 1

I went to the Summer Palace on last week. At the gate I happened to meet some

America tourists. I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know

that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures

and were much impressed with the changes had taken place in the past few years. After

which, we went boating on a lake and had a good time. We exchanged our email

address so that we could write to each other on the future. They thanked me again and

again. I was very glad to have a chance to practising my oral English

去掉on tourists→American 3. greeted →travelling 去掉with 6. changes后加that the→in

No. 2

My classmate except me were in high spirits. At the coming party I would have to do

some cleanings, for I wasn’t able to dance and sing. During the party, I tried to keep

the room being clean. After the party I got rid the rubbish. Enjoying my classmates’

smiling faces, I felt their job worthwhile. When told the room will have been a dustbin

without me I thought of a saying, "There must have a use for my talent." You may

have no special talent, so as long as you try to do good in everything useful, you’ll find

everything is beautiful at every corner of your life. 2. some →cleaning 3. sing→or 去掉being 5. rid后加of job→my 7. have→ would 9. as→ but 10. do in→well

No. 3

Recently, we have had a discussing about if we should study by discussing in free class. Views vary from persons to person. Most of the students consider that it is of greatly

help studying by discussing in free class, that, they think, can help to find better ways

to solve problems. What is much, they believe that they learn by discussing can last

longer in their memories. However, there are 35 percents of the students holding the

opposite view it is not good. They insist that discussing mean lacking thinking and the

loud noises is caused by it will disturb others.

2. from 3. greatly→great

4. that→which 5. much→more 7. percents→percent

8. view后加that 9. mean→means 10. 去掉is

No. 4

Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by. It used to be a

quiet, clean and beautiful place for a school. It is a pity which things have changed

after a chemical factory was built near our school one year ago. Every day the factory

produces many waste water and some harmful gases. The terribly pollution is harmful

to our health. What’s bad, the great noise from the factory had a bad effect on our

activities. As a result, our school is no longer what it used to. Our teachers and students

are miserable beyond the description.

1. on→at 2. passes→passing 3. which→that 4. after→since 5. many→much

6. terribly→terrible 7. bad →worse 8. had→has 9.used to后加be 10. 去掉the

No. 5

Now I’d like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon

we are all held together for our 18-years-old birthday. At the first we promised that like

grown-ups we should be responsible for our society. Then we expressed thank to our

parents who experienced hardships to bring us up and our teachers who educated us

heart or soul. And our teachers also gave to us cards expressing our goodi,went,to,the,summer,palace,last

congratulations and wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderfully performances.

1. took 前加that 2. are→were 3. 18-years-old→18-year-old

4. 去掉first前面的the 5. like→as 6.thank→thanks 7. or→and

8. 去掉gave后面的to 10. wonderfully→wonderful

No. 6

In the country now, there are many children do not attend the school. I think one of the

reasons is that their families are very poor to send them to school. They had to stay at

home to make money to support their families. Other reason is that many parents think

it useless of the girls to study and they do not like them to go to school. A third reason

is what some children are not interesting in their lessons. In my opinion, all children,

included girls, have the chance to receive education. Everybody should pay attention

for the education of the children.

1. children前加who/that 2. 去掉attend后面的the 3. very→too 4.

had→have

5. other→another 6. of→for 7. what→that 8. interesting→interested

9. included→including 10. for→to

No. 7

It is known to us, a severe tusnami occurred in the Indian Ocean in December 26, 2004. It’s reported that more than 10 countries were suffered from the disaster. But it caused

more than 200,000 deaths and left million of people homeless. Countless houses and

schools have destroyed. Just imagine how the students here need help. Schools should

be rebuilt so that they could return to classes soon. Here the Student Union calls for

everyone to do something for them. We’ll have a voluntary contribution this week.

Let’s give away our pocket’s money.

1.→As December→on 去掉were 4. But→And

5. million→millions 6. destroyed前加been →on 10. pocket’s→pocket

No. 8

The Guangming Middle School is in west of the city, with the Chengxi River run

nearby. When you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in the front of you,

and two large buildings on both side: the library on your right and the teach building

on your left. Walk on further, and you will find the sports building. Behind which,

there are two basketball courts. On the north of them is the sports ground. On it’s east

side stand two buildings: the dining hall, or the dormitory. All the buildings of the

school is surrounded by bushes and flowers.

1. west前加the 2. run→running 3. front去掉the 4. both →sides building→teaching 6. further→farther →it

8. On the→and

No. 9

One morning, Mrs. Smith’s dog was hunger. She took out a piece of paper, that read,

“Give it half a pound of meat.” Then she gave it to the dog saying “Bring it to the

butcher’s.” The dog ran here and gave the paper to the butcher. He read it and did.

Soon, the dog came again and gave him other piece of paper. Without looking, he did

so once more. Two hours late it came again. He wandered why Mrs. Smith gave it so

much meat. He read the paper and found out there was not a single word on it. What a

clever dog it was!

1.hunger→hungry 2. read→which 3. Bring→Take 4. ran →there

第二篇:《英语短文改错30篇_附答案》

I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.

改错二

I went to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.

改错三

Dear Ralph,

I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?

改错四

Dear Bob,

Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country.

First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.

Yours, Li Hua

Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them, there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.

改错六

Dear Li Ming,

I have received your letter yesterday. Don’t worry about you. I’m getting along well with my research works in the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. I’m afraid I can’t agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important at our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there is a way.

改错七

Dear Sally,

Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job, in it I work like a guide in a travel agency. This is the first time when I have earned money. I’ve realized what hard my parents work to support for the family. I was used to ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money or learn to share worry with my parents. I’ve learnt how to get along well with other. What’s more, I have gained some social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from textbooks. In the word, I had a wonderfully and valuable summer vacation.

改错八

Sports is fun and most people in the world, whether men or woman , boys or girls enjoy them. Since long ago, many adults and children called their friends together to spend many hours play games. Why? One of the reasons is that sports help make them live happy. In the other words, they help to keep people strong and feeling good. When they were playing games, they move a lot. That is why sports are good activities for their healthy. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports with watching others play.

No. 9

I went to the Summer Palace on last week. At the gate I happened to meet some America tourists. I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes

had taken place in the past few years. After which, we went boating on a lake and had a good time. We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other on the future. They thanked me again and again. I was very glad to have a chance to practising my oral English

No.10

My classmate except me were in high spirits. At the coming party I would have to do some cleanings, for I wasn’t able to dance and sing. During the party, I tried to keep the room being clean. After the party I got rid the rubbish. Enjoying my classmates’ smiling faces, I felt their job worthwhile. When told the room will have been a dustbin without me I thought of a saying,

"There must have a use for my talent." You may have no special talent, so as long as you try to do good in everything useful, you’ll find everything is beautiful at every corner of your life.

No. 11

Recently, we have had a discussing about if we should study by discussing in free class. Views vary from persons to person. Most of the students consider that it is of greatly help studying by discussing in free class, that, they think, can help to find better ways to solve problems. What is much, they believe that they learn by discussing can last longer in their memories. However, there are 35 percents of the students holding the opposite view it is not good. They insist that discussing mean lacking thinking and the loud noises is caused by it will disturb others.

No. 12

Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by. It used to be a quiet, clean and beautiful place for a school. It is a pity which things have changed after a chemical factory was built near our school one year ago. Every day the factory produces many waste water and some harmful gases. The terribly pollution is harmful to our health. What’s bad, the great noise from the factory had a bad effect on our activities. As a result, our school is no longer what it used to. Our teachers and students are miserable beyond the description.

No. 13

Now I’d like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we are all held together for our 18-years-old birthday. At the first we promised that like grown-ups we should be responsible for our society. Then we expressed thank to our parents who experienced hardships to bring us up and our teachers who educated us heart or soul. And our teachers also gave to us cards expressing our good congratulations and wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderfully performances.

No. 14

In the country now, there are many children do not attend the school. I think one of the reasons is that their families are very poor to send them to school. They had to stay at home to make money to support their families. Other reason is that many parents think it useless of the girls to study and

they do not like them to go to school. A third reason is what some children are not interesting in their lessons. In my opinion, all children, included girls, have the chance to receive education. Everybody should pay attention for the education of the children.

No. 15

It is known to us, a severe tusnami occurred in the Indian Ocean in December 26, 2004. It’s reported that more than 10 countries were suffered from the disaster. But it caused more than 200,000 deaths and left million of people homeless. Countless houses and schools have destroyed. Just imagine how the students here need help. Schools should be rebuilt so that they could return to classes soon. Here the Student Union calls for everyone to do something for them. We’ll have a voluntary contribution this week. Let’s give away our pocket’s money.

No. 16

The Guangming Middle School is in west of the city, with the Chengxi River run nearby. When you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in the front of you, and two large buildings on both side: the library on your right and the teach building on your left. Walk on further, and you will find the sports building. Behind which, there are two basketball courts. On the north of them is the sports ground. On it’s east side stand two buildings: the dining hall, or the dormitory. All the buildings of the school is surrounded by bushes and flowers.

No. 17

One morning, Mrs. Smith’s dog was hunger. She took out a piece of paper, that read, “Give it half a pound of meat.” Then she gave it to the dog saying “Bring it to the butcher’s.” The dog ran here and gave the paper to the butcher. He read it and did. Soon, the dog came again and gave him other piece of paper. Without looking, he did so once more. Two hours late it came again. He wandered why Mrs. Smith gave it so much meat. He read the paper and found out there was not a single word on it. What a clever dog it was!

No. 18i,went,to,the,summer,palace,last

Mr. Chen has a habit of drink. The best present to him, of course, is wine. His the eldest son brought him a bottle of Mao Tai. He was glad and drank them up. Then he wrote “105”on the trademark with a pencil, meant he had already drunk 105 bottles the wine. Two days late, a stranger came and offered to paying 5 Yuan for the empty bottle. Mr. Chen was very pleasnt and sold it. Several days later, his second son brought him other bottle of Mao Tai. While enjoying it, he suddenly found out “105”----the very mark on it.

No. 19

One day a lawyer happened to see a man beat a donkey with a stick. “Why were you doing that?” asked the lawyer. “To make the donkey to go.” answered the man. “Have you right to beat the animal lik

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